Wow. that made that scene more intense than usual. With my book, I considered many places for music, but never thought of how to crowbar it in. When I wrote about the location, I had mainly decided on the location from Death Wish 2, THAT part of LA, the dark, grungy, nightmare, and especially the track "Shadow in The City" by Jimmy Page kept popping up. Toscano, you should give that a listen, its a really great track.
Of course, some minor action will occur, and according to those notes from 2011 includes:
A chase through the dingy streets, through buildings and other places, ala Busting from 1974.
The various murders taking place throughout the book as well (lighting, intensity of the danger)
And some stuff I'm planning at the moment
As for the ending, I'm not spoiling everything, but I had the killer already sorted, his motive, and reasoning all write down.
Woah, after reading through my old notes I realised something. Younger Joe was more on the ball than Older Joe