I can. It is readable, sentences mostly make sense and there are no words that doesn’t exist i Croatian. But, lots of frazes are awkward and would be said in different way in Croatian. If you are interested, I could make the adjustments to the text and send it to you?
PS: name of the language should be “Hrvatski” not “Hrvat” and name of this topic should be “Uvod”, not “Uvot”.
PPS: most people in Croatia (well, most that would find swdb on net) can read English version perfectly well, but I appreciate the addition