Hey, Jordan. I had a copy with me on my skiing trip and it was better than what Austrian tv had to offer
I´m not an avid reader, but it was really easy for me to get into this one. Plenty of weird stuff going on. I think you went a bit overboard with all the spaghetti references. They seemed to detract a bit from the story. But that´s just a minor quibble. Also detected some giallo references, Short Night of Glass Dolls if I remember correctly.
Overall a very entertaining read, that would make a cool movie.